Sunday, August 26, 2012

Fantasy Guest Post from author M.L. Hamilton

As a tour stop for fantasy author M.L. Hamilton's book The Star of Eldon, here are her tips for writing fantasy! Let us see what she says about creating believable fantasy characters, stories, and worlds.


Author M.L. Hamilton. Read on for her advice on writing fantasy!

What makes fantasy characters appealing?
Good question. I think it's the same thing that makes fantasy appealing -- the chance to escape into a new world with different creatures and yet still find that thread of humanity in them that we can identify. If you can see elements of your personality in a creature of mystery and magic, that's pretty amazing. I will never forget being in the theatre and weeping when Dobby from Harry Potter died, then realizing it was a CGI creation, yet I still felt devastated. Another time I felt this was in Avatar when they destroyed the Tree of Souls. I watched that scene with a hand over my mouth and tears in my eyes. When Frodo throws the ring of power into Mount Doom, you fight that struggle with him. He isn't a Hobbit, he's someone you know and love. That is power and the author is holding that bag of emotional magic.

How to make fantasy stories believable?
I try to have a "logical" explanation for everything that happens in my world and I stick to that. If you create laws for that world, first you have to remember what those laws are and you can't just "work around" them as a plot device. I think fantasy becomes unbelievable if you set rigid rules for your world, then ignore them willy nilly just to advance the story. Readers, especially fantasy readers, will immediately pick up on the contradiction. For example, early drafts ofEmerald had the characters drinking coffee. Everyone who read the drafts kept getting hung up on the coffee and feeling it wasn't in keeping with the world I created. In the beginning I was adamant that I had to have my coffee, but I finally gave it up. It was too big a distraction for people and didn't allow them to enjoy the story. It was an inconsistency that they couldn't accept, and boy did they tell me about it.

How to bring a fantasy world to life?
Keep to the basics. I know that sounds strange when one is writing fantasy, but you still have to try to make the people and the environment reasonable. People have to recognize enough in your world to accept it. Then you can bring in fantastical elements, but you have to ground your reader first. Humans are creatures of customs and rituals. No matter how strange the customs and rituals may be in a fantasy world, you have to have them because it's those things that bring our own worlds alive. Most of my fantasy books start slow because I take the time to orient the reader in my world and my customs before I turn it on its ear.



And I suppose you are curious about what her book is about?

The Star of Eldon is the book #3 in the World of Samar series, so lets get to know the 1st two below first:

The First Novel in the World of Samar Series - #1 EmeraldIn one terrible instant, Kai is thrown from his comfortable life and plunged into a conflict that began before he was born. Worse yet, he learns that the one man who can help him is his enemy.

Kiameron is the crown prince of DiNolfol. He is torn between two destinies -- taking the crown upon his father's death or answering the call of his non-Human-like traits, traits associated with the mysterious Stravad.

The decision is made with the destruction of everything he holds dear. Armed with his strange powers and a mysterious talisman he doesn't know how to use, Kai decides to attack Gava, the despot who destroyed his life.

Crippled by self-doubt and fear, he falters in his quest, until he meets a man who forces him to take action. However, his new ally is hiding secrets, secrets that will rob Kai of everything he held sacred.




The Second Novel in the World of Samar Series - #2 The Heirs of Eldon

Tav and Tash might have been born twins, but they both want something different from life. Tav would love to study with the great scholars in Voltarian, while Tash wants to follow in his father’s footsteps, becoming a hero. Neither is prepared for what fate has in store for them.

With Loden once more facing war, an upstart king decides he has the answer. Unite the seven protectorates under one flag. Can he accomplish his dream? Can the sons of Kiameron keep him alive long enough to find out?


Finally the book of our interest-




The Third Novel in the World of Samar Series - #3 The Star of Eldon

The Seven Protectorates have enjoyed years of peace under Tav’s leadership, but a growing worry has surfaced. What about the land beyond Loden’s border? Where once there had been overtures of trade, now there is nothing. Tav decides to send a diplomatic expedition to re-establish contact, but who should go?

Adventure runs in the blood of Tash’s children, especially in his head-strong daughter, Shara. Shara wants nothing more than to be part of the expedition to Nevaisser, but her father will never agree. He fears for her safety, but a rash decision on his part takes the choice out of his hands and sets up a chain of events that will have far reaching consequences.

Nevaisser is a land teeming with conflict and at the heart of it is a mysterious stranger, hiding secrets that will test the alliance of the Seven Protectorates. A journey begun to protect Loden may result in tearing it apart.

Continue the adventure with the third installment in the World of Samar series.

Saturday, August 25, 2012

11th Free “Dear Lucky Agent” Contest (Middle Grade Fiction)


I was checking my email last night and found this contest, the 11th free "Dear Lucky Agent" contest! With very positive reviews on the first few chapters of my fantasy middle-grade novel, I thought, "Hey, why not enter?"




The genre is middle-grade fiction too!

The top 3 winners all get...
1) A critique of the first 10 double-spaced pages of your work, by your agent judge, Sara Sciuto of Full Circle Literary Agency.
2) A free one-year subscription to WritersMarket.com.

Sara Sciuto of Full Circle Literary Agency.

Well, here I go, promoting the contest on my Twitter and modeling Facebook page too! Wish me luck.

Friday, August 24, 2012

Writer of the Week #22: F.T. Bradley



Double Vision, due out this October, is the first of a middle grade adventure spy series!


Name: F.T Bradley 

Age: Old enough to remember the Walkman... 

Website: www.ftbradley.com


Location: Biloxi, MS 

When did you realize you wanted to be a published author? 
 Hmmm... It's hard to pinpoint exactly, but I think I got serious after my second child was born. I wrote short crime fiction for many years before trying my hand at novel-length fiction. DOUBLE VISION was my sixth novel-length manuscript... 

Name 5 authors and 5 books Elmore Leonard's WHEN THE WOMEN COME OUT TO DANCE, Harlan Coben's SHELTER, Stephen King's 11/22/63, Anthony's Horowitz's STORMBREAKER, Anne Tyler's THE ACCIDENTAL TOURIST 

Where do you get your inspiration from? Reading books, watching movies, and laughing at the jokes my kids tell me--I love humor, and try to weave it into my books wherever I can. Historical trivia are great story starters for me, particularly because DOUBLE VISION revolves around the search for a dangerous artifact. I also get inspired by location--the first book is set in Paris, which has so many cinematic settings, it was hard to choose. 

What do you think is the best quality a writer can have? 
A willingness to learn. Writing is a craft, which means you're constantly honing your skills, so you really need to be open to suggestions to improve. That said, you also need to know when to ignore advice...

 Any last words? (Fun facts, comments, something you'd like to share with the world, etc.) 
Always bring a snack for the road :-) 

Challenge: Write a one-sentence story! 
For rent: three bedroom house, new carpet and paint, freshly tilled garden, 25-to-life lease length preferred.


Thank you so much for your answers, Leah!  If anyone is interested in being a writer of the week, please read the instructions here.

Tuesday, August 21, 2012

Writer's Digest Helps Me Deal With Writer's Block

Last week started out with a creativity renewal. I was quite productive.

With draft #3, I am splitting up a lot of the chapters in draft #2 in separate, shorter (and sometimes fleshed-out, due to necessity of character development) chapters. There are also some new scenes, which I hope will enrich the plot. I was able to get up to draft #3 of chapter 9. But after that, my creativity made the fatal mistake to go sky-diving. Creativity met up with a gory ending.

Let's hope these skydivers had a more successful sky dive than Creativity did!


How am I dealing with this? Well, first, I read my September 2012 issue of Writer's Digest. It has Chris Cleave on the cover, but what really stood out to me about the issue's cover were the captions "7 Strategies for More Productive Writing" and "Learn to Be Creative on Demand."



I'm going to make a shout-out to the articles "How to be Creative on Demand" by Roger Morris and "7 Steps to a Foolproof Revision" by Don Fry. In Morris's article, one tip that stood out to me was...

Tip #2: Pump Your Skills of Observation
EXCERPT: ...Why not hone your skills of description?....Whether you're practicing by describing a restaurant's decor as you're waiting for a table, or a stunning landscape you're enjoying on vacation, use a mixture of comparisons and contrasts, plus well-picked adjectives and adverbs.

This brought back a memory from age 12, when my family and I were going for a car ride to somewhere. We were on the highway, the sun was setting, and the sky was violet, pricked with burning streaks like firebirds' tails. My mom challenged my brother and I to come up with a description of the sky.

From Fry's article:

Tip #1: Complete Your Draft, Then Revise
...it's safe to say that the longest (and ultimately the most frustrating) way to revise is to just keep writing sentences and revising them, and changing anything your revision damages.
So what's the fastest way? In my experience, it's this: Draft the entire piece with no revision whatsoever, and then revise the whole thing, start to finish (sometimes twice, if you have the time).

Holy cow, this is already what I do! This is generally how I deal with my writing, whether it's essays, short stories, poems, or even my novel. I just go through the entire thing, try to slash my way through pesky thorns, and then go back to revise and clean up.

Oh gosh, I can't resist Disney references, but........

I wish revising was this effortless...


...and not like this!

Listening to lots and lots of metal is helping too.

"Motherzone" by Deathstars

"Storms" by Siebenburgen




Well, time to get back to Chapter 14! If you guys remember my blog post "Dancing With a Paraplegic," the ball scene, the scene in which my paraplegic character Princess Isolda, is now Chapter 14.

Friday, August 17, 2012

Writer of the Week #21: Leah Clifford

Read Leah's latest novel in her trilogy, A Touch Morbid!


Name: Leah Clifford

Age: 31

Website: http://www.leahclifford.com/ though you're more likely to find me on Twitter (https://twitter.com/LeahClifford) or Tumblr (http://leahclifford.tumblr.com/)

Location: Ohio currently

When did you realize you wanted to be a published author?
It sounds cliche, but I knew I wanted to be an author even before I learned to read. As soon as I realized that there were people who made the books I loved having read to me, I wanted to be one of the people that made them.

Name 5 authors and 5 books
Authors: Scott Tracey, Nova Ren Suma, Courtney Allison Moulton, JT Leroy, Nicole Krauss
Books: A History of Love, House of Leaves, A Walk in the Woods, White Cat, Delirium

Where do you get your inspiration from?
Sometimes it'll be a strange sentence that pops into my head. Other times I'll see a picture that will pique my interest. Always, it's something that gets me interested in finding out more. Why did that happen? Why did the character say that? Once I need to know that answers, I start the search for why. Sometimes they end up stories.

What do you think is the best quality a writer can have?
Time management, which I sadly lack

Any last words?
I include hidden movie references into all of my books.

Challenge: Write a one-sentence story!
Andrew Lawson tied his shoe, satisfaction glinting in his eyes as he ignored the bloodied ends of his laces.




Thank you so much for your answers, Leah!  If anyone is interested in being a writer of the week, please read the instructions here.





Sunday, August 12, 2012

Learning to Pitch, Part 1

I'm sure not the only one who feels this way, but I have this aggravating fear that whenever I open my mouth, I start alienating people. And for months, I've been dreading describing my novel to people. Thankfully, with some practice recently, I have gained some confidence.

Here are general outlines of my conversations with various persons (and instead of calling the person "A person," I'm calling him/her "Cookie." I am dead serious that "Cookie" is a synonym for "person" according to Merriam-Webster).




More than a year ago, when I was trying to test my premise on Deviantart.com:

Me: How does a story about an eleven-year old girl with a key-hole in her neck having to hold military secrets for a general sound?

Deviantart Cookie #1: To be honest, it sounds far fetched, even for fantasy. I like the concept of the girl, but the military purpose part sounds too far fetched. Maybe if the girl held ancient secrets, and they have to go find the key, and these secrets will help defeat the ancient evil, sounds more believable fantasy story then the military using her.

My thoughts: Thank you for the feedback...but...I'm sorry...the concept of ancient secrets and defeating an ancient evil has been done to death.

Deviantart Cookie #2: Don't ask. Write it so that it's good enough that people WILL want to read it. Deciding what to write by using a poll is no way to go about it. If you want to write it, do it.
My thoughts: I needed this advice. Thank you Deviantart Cookie #2!


Approximately 10 months ago:
Cookie: What do you do for fun?

Me: Oh, um...draw...write...um...writing my novel

Cookie: You're writing a novel? What's your novel about?

Me: Oh, um...well...it's a fantasy middle-grade novel...about a girl...um...it's in a very rough draft mode...


No further memory of conversation. Conclusion? My pitching is an UTTER FAILURE.






Approximately 4 months ago:
Cookie: What do you do when you're not doing schoolwork?

Me: I'm writing a novel.

Cookie: Really? What's your novel about?

Me: It's about an eleven year old girl who belongs to a race of people with key holes in their necks, and because of this, they're supposed to be very good at keeping military secrets. My main character's uncle needs to her befriend a paraplegic princess from a neighboring kingdom because he's trying to bring down the corrupt monarchy. But she becomes best friends with the princess, and has to choose between her loyalty to her family and to her friend.


Cookie: Wow! That sounds really original!


Yes! Yes! A positive comment on originality! That is...if she's not just trying to be polite...


That concludes part one of my pitching attempts and adventures.


Friday, August 10, 2012

Writer of the Week #20: Holly Cupala

Check out Holly's heavy YA novel Don't Breathe a Word!



Name: Holly Cupala

Age: 38

Website: www.hollycupala.com

Location: Seattle, WA

When did you realize you wanted to be a published author?
I’ve always in my heart of hearts wanted to be a writer. I wrote two teen romances when I was in eighth grade, before I actually experienced teen romance. After that, I wrote tragic stories and poetry (first love was brutal), wrote for adults and then finally circled back. TELL ME A SECRET was my first YA, and my second, DON’T BREATHE A WORD, just came out.

Name 5 authors and 5 books
Five favorite YA-ish books:
Speak, by Laurie Halse Anderson
The Bell Jar, by Sylvia Plath
Book of a Thousand Days, by Shannon Hale
Fat Kid Rules the World, by K.L. Going
Dragonswood, by Janet Lee Carey


Where do you get your inspiration from?
The darkest corners of life, and the light that illuminates them.

What do you think is the best quality a writer can have?
Courage—to examine the dark corners, to put words on the page, to make them as beautiful and honest as possible, to face rejection from many corners, and even to find success.

Any last words?
A wise friend says to “write through the bad stuff.” I think those words apply to life, too: live through the bad stuff. The point is, live.

Challenge: Write a one-sentence story!
When I looked back at the frozen moments of memories passing, events captured in minutes and hours, I realized it wasn’t my enemy who poisoned me—it was time itself. (Just for you, Jo!)




Thank you so much for your answers, Holly! (Especially your one-sentence story, hehe!) If anyone is interested in being a writer of the week, please read the instructions here.