Saturday, May 26, 2012

Draft #2 is Done!




I finished this morning! Draft #2 of my novel is complete! After 272 days after starting draft #1 (or 143 days after finishing draft #1), I'm done with the second draft! This is how I felt right after typing out the final words of the epilogue:



 But wait! Now I have to work on draft #3!



Ah, yes, draft #3. I have a new scene in mind that I have to (most likely) insert in chapter 2. Invent a name for a religion. Refine and polish my writing. Build up the roles of a few characters. Give a better reason for why certain children have to regurgitate beautiful silver charms. And several other surgical performances to render my manuscript alluring enough to present to agents.




Can I possibly finish draft #3 and have my manuscript be query-ready by the end of summer? Along with conquering my evil mandatory calculus course, which I have to get a good grade in upon pain of death?


Wednesday, May 23, 2012

Typing up Chapter 13


After typing up yesterday's blog post, I just had to write another one today. I'm taking a break from typing chapter 13 for now. I am now at the novel's climax! I can't reveal too much, but I have to say that the fact that I sprained my ankle on Monday is a blessing. Satu sprains an ankle in this chapter. Although I have sprained my ankles three times in the past, spraining my ankle on Monday has refreshed my memory of how painful a sprain can be!

I was partially inspired by the event "Mandyland" from the game Vampire Wars


If I had to summarize the atmosphere and aesthetics of this chapter, I would describe it has a topsy-turvy kaleidoscopic-colored circus that is, on the surface, an innocent revelry for a royal princess's birthday party, but masks a sinister plan full of dolls, wine, and adult recklessness. This chapter is also sprinkled with revelations, test of relationships between characters, and a few reunions.

I'm having so much fun with this chapter. I wrote the first draft in my notebook on my birthday (fitting, since there is a birthday party in the chapter!). Here are more inspirations I had running through my head when writing this chapter:


The "Topsy Turvy" scene from Disney's adaption of The Hunchback of Notre Dame

One of my old drawings, titled "I Want It"

That creepy dinner scene with the pale man from Pan's Labyrinth

The Night Circus, written by the lovely Erin Morgenstern

Whimsical, creative tiered cakes



The artworks of Takaya Miou

Marina Bychkova's dolls

The song "Cyanide" by the Swedish metal band Deathstars


Now, before I end my post and return to typing chapter 13, the three main albums I listened to when writing this chapter were Carnival of Lost Souls by Nox Arcana, Grim Confections by Cindergarden, and Imaginaerum by Nightwish. Here is a track from each of those albums:

"Living Dolls" by Nox Arcana



"Candles on a Cake" by Cindergarden


"Scaretale" by Nightwish



Till next time! :)

Tuesday, May 22, 2012

Survivor of Finals Week!

My apologies for not being so active on my blog as I used to be. I had been so swamped with finals week, and after finals week, I just needed to recuperate and felt as though I was lacking energy and motivation. Well, finals week is over...but in June, I have to go back to summer school for eight weeks of Math 1B. UGH. My worst subject...and after that's over, I have a couple weeks of summer left before Fall semester starts. I'm going to be a sophomore! Time to face even more excruciating weeder classes designed as a campaign of mass murders of naive students' GPA's in the hopes of finding the diamonds among the rough!

This applies to finals too! D: Image courtesy of the UC Berkeley Memes page on Facebook.


Freshman year is over! Okay, enough bemoaning over school for now. Novel update time!

Ever since spring break ended, I had been in a slow-mo limbo while typing chapter 10 of my novel, which, if you remember, was discussed in this post. I felt creatively drained as I was constitutively studying. Pretty much, I was typing up a few sentences a day. Then, after finals were over, I went back to my novel and essentially spewed out a level of composition in which a kindergartner can surpass me in.

Either chemistry had drained me of creativity, or I really was suffering a horrible writer's block.

Last week, I just speed-typed chapters 11 and 12, knowing (or at least, hoping) that I will return to refine them once I'm done with draft #2 of my novel. I'm currently typing up Chapter 13, which contains the climax of the novel, and is my favorite chapter. But I'll talk more about that in my next post.







P.S. Due to the considerable amount of time it takes me to assemble a list of authors, email them, receive no responses from a good number of them, and format the responses of those who do get back to me, my Writer of the Week feature is currently on hiatus. I do intend to return to it, and am still open to responses from writers, but right now, due to the priorities of academics and my novel, it will be put on hold.


Friday, May 18, 2012

Writer of the Week #16: Jaclyn Dolamore


Jaclyn is the author of Magic Under Glass, which  made it onto the booklist of Top 10  First Novel for Youths




Name: Jaclyn Dolamore

Age: 30

Website: http://jaclyndolamore.blogspot.com

Location: Outside of Hagerstown, MD

When did you realize you wanted to be a published author?
As far back as I can recall. When I was nine I wrote a story about a girl and her horse so I could sell it, even though I didn't care for horses, because I knew horses were popular with other girls, and I got Writer's Market out from the library and wrote it by hand, formatted for submission. I was too chicken to actually submit it, though. Perhaps subconsciously I knew it was an awful story. I also spent a lot of time writing other stories, but that was the first time I considered publication.

Name 5 authors and 5 books
I have talked about my very favorite books ad nauseum on other blogs, so you, I shall give five YA (or upper MG) that I think should be more widely read:
A True and Faithful Narrative by Katherine Sturtevant
The Hollow Kingdom by Clare B. Dunkle
A Long Long Sleep by Anna Sheehan
Faery Rebels/Knife by R. J. Anderson
Confessions of the Sullivan Sisters by Natalie Standiford

Where do you get your inspiration from?
History and the fascinatingly diverse world we live in inspire my settings, while my plots and characters tend to be inspired by plots and characters I love in other people's works. I like to dig out what makes me love a story, twist it, and use it for my own.

What do you think is the best quality a writer can have?
Dedication to craft.

Any last words?
If any of your readers are in the mid-Atlantic region, please do check my website for events! I love meeting readers.

Challenge: Write a one-sentence story!
All she knew was that the vintage cocktail dress gave her more confidence, and the ghost that haunted the wiggle-cut taffeta affair was happy enough for her to keep on thinking it.











Thank you so much for your insightful answers, Jaclyn! If anyone is interested in being a writer of the week, please read the instructions here.

Friday, April 27, 2012

Writer of the Week #15: Richard Ungar


Check out Richard's middle-grade novel Time Snatchers. Isn't the cover epic?

Name: Richard Ungar

Age: 53
Location: Toronto, Canada

When did you realize you wanted to be a published author? 
About 15 years ago.

Name 5 authors and 5 books
Connie Willis - The Doomsday Book
Neil Gaiman - Neverwhere
George R.R. Martin - A Game of Thrones
Richard Matheson - When Dreams May Come
Joe Haldeman - The Accidental Time Machine

Where do you get your inspiration from? 
Reading, eavesdropping on conversations on the subway

What do you think is the best quality a writer can have? 
perseverance

Any last words?  
I like to fly paper airplanes

Challenge: Write a one-sentence story!
With trembling hands, he lifted the cup to his lips to drink the nectar that would give him everlasting life but his cat got there first.



Thank you so much for your answer, Richard! If anyone is interested in being a Writer of the Week, please follow the instructions here.

Thursday, April 19, 2012

Diary in Novel; No Writer of the Week This Week

Hi Everyone,

Due to the fact that I had two blog tour posts this week, I will not have a Writer of the Week tomorrow. But there will be another author coming up next week, so stay tuned for that (hint: he's written a middle grade sci-fi novel that involves time traveling!).

Novel writing is still going strong, though progress is currently slow due to the fact that finals week is coming up, and I'm freaking out over my chem final and how I'm going to balance that with my other finals, in addition to enrolling in classes and my summer plans and wanting to continue writing.




Over spring break a few weeks ago, I speed-typed through quite a few chapters. Currently, I am typing up draft #2 of Chapter 10 of my novel. This chapter is the diary entry of a supporting character, a dead queen who kept a diary when she was alive. As a university student who attends a ball at the castle, she captures the attention of a king, continuously rejects his love, and is ultimately pressured into marrying him. But the marriage doesn't turn out so pretty--there's forbidden love, the birth of a sickly child, paranoia, regression into mental illness, and ultimately death.



These two songs really helps me get in the mood of writing Chapter 10. The first is "Diary of Jane" by Breaking Benjamin, and the second is "Bloodflower" by Draconian. Emotions of longing, tragic love, and feeling lost seems to dominate the mood. Probably due to the fact that this chapter is a flashback and focuses on some of the adult characters of the story, this segment feels more mature than the other parts of the novel. Aren't these lyrics from "Bloodflower" beautiful?

You are the star, you are the moon
You are the soil where shadows bloom
Casting a light which brings me peace
Where the caverns of death will freeze



In the meantime, I gotta get back to studying and writing papers. Toodles!



Tuesday, April 17, 2012

Blog Tour: Seven Point Eight by Marie Harbon

This is my first blog tour post. Eee! So excited!
Today, I have the honor to host author Marie Harbon's debut sci-fi novel Seven Point Eight, the first in a five-part chronicle in which five characters seek the answers to the purpose of the universe and and question their existence. The characters are the talented and exotic Tahra Mamoun, PhD physicist Dr. Paul Eldridge, shrewd womanizer and businessman Max Richardson, compassionate geneticist Ava, and artsy musician Sam.

The series promises to be an intriguing exploration of the sciences, particularly quantum physics and biology, as some of the characters are heavily involved in research. But as this is the first book, there was more emphasis on character relationships, particularly between Tahra Mamoun and her benefactor Max Richardson, who takes her out of her life in the Middle East to educate her in the sciences in exchange for her intelligence for a career that would benefit his own. This was an intriguing read, with much dynamic intensity between the characters, and opens up with a particularly fascinating lecture given by Dr. Paul Eldridge:

Author Marie Harbon

“Today you have ridden a photon, where we
discovered that time is only relative to the speed of the
observer and, as we travel closer to the speed of light, time
slows down. If we were to journey to the star, Sirius, which is
eight light years away, at close to 186,000 miles per second,
we would return home to find everyone much older than
ourselves. Einstein also attempted to draw together space,
time, matter, gravitation and electromagnetism into one unified
theory, but this eludes him and it remains incomplete”.
“This brings us to the world of quantum weirdness;
where the universe exists as an infinite number of possibilities,
having no precise location or being until something happens to
lock one of those possibilities into place. This is known as
Heisenberg’s Uncertainty Principle and it was postulated in
1927. In his double-slit experiment, a photon particle behaved
as if it passed through both slits at the same time, but, when it
was observed closely, it chose a definite slit. He concluded that
when we observe something, we turn quantum possibilities
into reality. Maybe it also means we can be in two places at
once!...I conclude this lecture with more questions; where is
quantum theory taking us? Will our reality be further shattered,
our quantum experiences breaking the bottom of the proverbial
pail? Will the world change beyond recognition because of
this? What applications will we find for this new knowledge?
And where, if any place whatsoever, is there room for God?


Once in a million chance. Harbon's book will be free from 16th April - 19th April on the Kindle Store. So what are you waiting for? Go and get your free copy on there during those three days!


And here is a quiz to see which character from Six Point Seven you are most like:

1. What interests you in life?
a. Exploring and being a part of something bigger
b. Science, technology
c. Music, art, creative self-expression
d. Nice house, stylish cars and fine clothes
e. Making a difference, doing something fantastic to benefit others

2. If you’re attracted to someone, how would you pursue them?
a. Pull out all the stops and use all your powers of seduction
b. The natural approach; strike up conversation and see where it goes
c. The romantic approach; write or sing a beautiful song
d. Splash out on gifts and fine dining
e. I must admit, I’ve been hurt before so I’m quite wary on an emotional level

3. What are your key strengths?
a. Courage, passion, determination
b. Intelligence, ability to solve problems
c. Creative and artistic
d. Leadership, persistence, cool headedness
e. Cooperation, compassion

4. Which ability would you prefer to be gifted with?
a. To see any place or time in the world
b. Intellectual genius
c. To speak with the dead
d. To be able to make a lot of money easily
e. Surprise me!

5. What is the purpose of special abilities?
a. To yield power over others
b. Success and recognition
c. They’re just a curse
d. To make money
e. To help others

6. What would others say are your key faults?
a. Can be manipulative and controlling
b. Not thinking things through properly, hasty
c. Can be cocky at times, a loner
d. Possessive, too obsessed with things
e. Too trusting at times


 MOSTLY A

You’re a feisty and passionate individual just like Tahra, who’ll stop at nothing to get what you want.
There’s an almost rebellious determination inside of you yet you love wholeheartedly and this brings out your sweeter side. Your downside is the need to exert control over others, try to be more sensitive.








MOSTLY B

Intellectually, you’re strong and will go far in the world of technology and science, like Paul. There is a naturalness and spontaneity about you and you generally get on well with others. However, you need to think your decisions through more carefully and look at the longer term repercussions.



MOSTLY C

You’re a romantic and artistic soul, just like Sam. Ideally, you’d like to get on with creating beautiful art or music but the Universe has other ideas. Deep down, you’re very sure of yourself but generally don’t blend well with others, preferring to beat your own drum.








MOSTLY D

You have your feet firmly planted in the material world, just like Max. Your status, lifestyle and the things you own are important to you but at times, you can cling too hard to these. In life, maybe you need to broaden your horizons and see that money and security aren’t everything.





MOSTLY E

Like Ava, you are a gentle soul who’d like to contribute something meaningful to the world, but you’re not sure how you fit in. Because you’re a genuine person deep down, you often believe others are the same but unfortunately, they can take advantage. However, you’re a credit to the world and your time will come!